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Submit Your Ad For Critique
Newspaper Ads Critique
Do you know why your ads don’t work?
The real answer is probably “No”. But if you send me your ad I’ll personally CRITIQUE it and give you suggestions for improving it—FREE!
How important is a newspaper ad critique? You be the judge…
Not long ago a business owner attended one of my newspaper ad workshops sponsored by a local newspaper. He brought the following newspaper ad to the workshop because it didn’t produce leads or sales…
During the workshop I suggested 3 simple changes. He applied them and here’s how the new ad (below) appeared in the newspaper…
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Big difference! But an even bigger result: the new ad pulled 23 responses in the first 2 days and gave the owner one of the biggest sales weeks in his store’s history.
I’m willing to critique your newspaper ad and
give you my valuable suggestions too.
But let’s check our expectations: I can’t pretend to know what your prospects are thinking, doing and reacting to when they see your ad. And I can’t know if they’re going to respond to your newspaper ad or not.
But what I do know is this: based on the thousands of newspaper ads I’ve written, designed, tested and critiqued over 26 years, I know what “elements” and words consistently generate higher leads and sales. My newspaper ads make a lot of businesses (like yours) a lot of money. Recently a San Diego business used my strategies and generated just over $500,000 dollars in sales in a few days. Not bad. But I’ve also seen businesses ignore my advice and squander their hard earned money on newspaper ads that produced zero response.
So here’s my offer: send me your newspaper ad. I’ll spend a minimum of 20 minutes reviewing it. I’ll make some specific “what-to-do-now” suggestions—which you can use to improve your ad right away. Then I’ll bundle the suggestions into a simple 2 page “Newspaper Ad Impact Report”, which will be emailed to you within 24 hours…UNLESS I’m overwhelmed in which case I’ll send you an email letting you know it may take longer.
Free Newspaper Ad Impact Report
In your “Newspaper Ad Impact Report” you’ll learn ways for improving the following elements:
- Your targeting.
- Your offer.
- Your headline.
- Your call to action.
- Your ad’s image.
- Your layout and design.
I’ll also tell you what you’re doing right; and if there’s anything urgent you need to know about your ad I’ll tell you that too.
Okay, so why am I doing this for free?
I’m doing this for 2 reasons:
Sounds corny, but I’m on a mission to help you improve your ad results. It’s my passion. And, yes I’m a “junkie” for the success stories I get.
If my suggestions prove helpful, you might consider hiring me to create your future newspaper ads. To succeed, you have to give something to get something; I’m willing to give you a valuable critique that people pay me big bucks for as a way to get you to be my customer.
